This is an excerpt of a new poetic letter called:
Please, keep your distance
Keep your distance
I do not want to suffer
Of your hurtful words
Your offenses, to my mind
The darkness surrounds me in this sweet night
I’m dressed and free of my actions
I am ready to meet, make delight
No more fear and tribulations
Previously, I was vomiting
When I heard your name cursed
Now I’ll sway me hips
On the Ride of the Valkyries (…)
The poetic letter is on the site of poetry: The free thoughts
This is the calendar : https://calendar.yahoo.com/joelleauteur
Categories: 1.Writing, 3. Poetic letters, 5. Literature
Hi there, I love your poems. They’re very evocative and have great imagery. They don’t say much but they bring out much 🙂
Thank you for letting your thoughts. Have a good day:)
Truly powerful and brave. The second stanza stands out!. Best wishes, Aquileana 😛
Much thank Aquileana for your feelings of this poetic letter. Have a nice weekend:)
Thanks for adding some poetry to my day!
Thank you for your visit Russel. You are very welcome! Spend a good day:)
A perfect blending of image and words! Nicely done Joelle!
Thank you Wendell, for your touching message. Spend a good weekend:)
Wow! Great rhythm! 🙂
Thank you. Have a good week:)
Your welcome! 🙂
Thank you for your visit Cindy. Have an enjoyable day.
Fabulous words fill the mind with imagery of her strong will of independence and breakthrough.
Much thanks Mary. Greetings:)
Oh well done, visceral and raw while being real..
Thank you S.E.Bailey. A good day for you.