Dear readers,
This is an excerpt of a new poetic letter called:
Please, keep your distance
Keep your distance
I do not want to suffer
Of your hurtful words
Your offenses, to my mind
The darkness surrounds me in this sweet night
I’m dressed and free of my actions
I am ready to meet, make delight
No more fear and tribulations
Previously, I was vomiting
When I heard your name cursed
Now I’ll sway me hips
On the Ride of the Valkyries (…)
The poetic letter is on the site of poetry: The free thoughts
Greetings.
This is the calendar : https://calendar.yahoo.com/joelleauteur
Categories: 1.Writing, 3. Poetic letters, 5. Literature
Hi there, I love your poems. They’re very evocative and have great imagery. They don’t say much but they bring out much 🙂
Thank you for letting your thoughts. Have a good day:)
Truly powerful and brave. The second stanza stands out!. Best wishes, Aquileana 😛
Much thank Aquileana for your feelings of this poetic letter. Have a nice weekend:)
Thanks for adding some poetry to my day!
Thank you for your visit Russel. You are very welcome! Spend a good day:)
A perfect blending of image and words! Nicely done Joelle!
Thank you Wendell, for your touching message. Spend a good weekend:)
Wow! Great rhythm! 🙂
Thank you. Have a good week:)
Your welcome! 🙂
Wonderful imagery!
Thank you for your visit Cindy. Have an enjoyable day.
Fabulous words fill the mind with imagery of her strong will of independence and breakthrough.
Much thanks Mary. Greetings:)
Oh well done, visceral and raw while being real..
Thank you S.E.Bailey. A good day for you.